In the second paragraph the wording should be revised to state "Alongside this we will plan for the business space, supporting community facilities, green spaces, infrastructure and access to excellent education provision to meet the needs of our growing communities " rather than "Alongside this we will plan for the business space, supporting community facilities, green spaces and infrastructure to meet the needs of our growing communities" to recognise the importance of access to excellent education provision as well.

In the fourth paragraph the wording should be revised to state "This means providing opportunities to regenerate or enhance areas that aren’t yet reaching their potential,..." rather than "This means providing opportunities to regenerate areas that aren’t yet reaching their potential,..." to recognise that areas can/should be improved through regeneration or enhancement.